2007年考研英语写作真题命题名师解析

2008年01月04日 来源:华商网
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  07年作文也不例外,写成自信、挑战、人生态度、不同角度均可,只要没有跑题太远即可。关键是语言基本正确、丰富多变;结构清晰、逻辑严谨。

  注意事项

  从1998-2006年,考研历史上图画作文考过八次,其中1998、2001、2002、2004、2005五年是一图写作,2000、2003、2006三年是两图写作。今年命题独出心裁,一图写作中暗含两图对比。

  根据教育部公布的《大纲解析》,大作文四大要素为描述、寓意、分析、评论。根据今年考题,首段应是图画描述,不应发表太多议论,否则属于跑题。图画描述至少应有两句,根据大纲解析,如果图画只字未提,扣三分之一的分数;如果图画只描述一句,属于描述不充分,扣3分。可将大图总体描述一句,然后将两幅小图分别描述各一句即可。

  第二段意义阐释可以分析这个问题背景、事实、反方观点、原因或后果;进行因果、分类、定义解释、统计事实、正反论证均可。由于第三点提纲是举例论证,第二段应对问题进行分析评论,不宜举例。论证自信、挑战、面对困难、人生态度、同一事物不同角度均可,关键是考查考生的语言表达和结构清晰,而非内容、观点或思维。

  第三段应为举例论证,根据今年提纲,举出一至两个例子均可。最好不要流于记叙,应有主题句和小结,写成夹叙夹议的段落。今年提纲中并未要求提出建议措施,不提也可。

  高分作文

  As we can see from the picture, a football match is going on. On guarding the door, the left man seems to be keeping a “huge door” that is easy and inevitable for a goal, while the right person hesitates to kick the ball with an illusion about the “huge door keeper”. It is obvious that both of them exaggerate the difficulties in front of them.

  This photo does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon which is not uncommon in China now. The young always give up because the problem is beyond their ability to cope with. Superficially, it seems to be somewhat reasonable, but when weighing in the mind, we find there is an apparent tendency underlying this phenomenon: the lack of confidence. Firstly, it is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. We can do nothing but face them. Secondly, attitude is the key point to take the first step. Assume bravery and confidence to solve the problem, you will find the question is not as “huge” as you imagine. Take us for example, the entrance exam for graduate students even seems to a horrible monster before us. Some people give up, some persist. So, with confidence and the right assessment of the difficulties, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems.

  On the whole, I believe we young people should face the difficulties in right manner. And nothing is impossible, just do it.

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